The Demon Lord returns to his former tomb to solve the mystery of the accursed box he hopes is a portal to Naskara. His ordeal in Damnation has left deep mental scars that make him leery of braving the unknown and not even sure he wants to help the light anymore. He has paid too high a price for doing so and all he wants now is to return home. In Naskara, he discovers who helped to free him, and why, and the dark angels who want him to be their god follow him there.Silven has more freedom, with Lathe as her protector, and she is unable to resist the lure of visiting her traveller friends. Marlan offers to teach her how to use magic, and a strange encounter reveals the presence of new enemies. Lathe keeps her safe, for now, but Arkonen has plans to exact his revenge on her father, and they include Silven. She is forced to seek the aid of a black cult, whose ties to warlocks and demons can protect her, and her family, but the arrangement has pitfalls. As long as Arkonen thinks she is on a dark path, he might choose to leave her be, but Lathe is vulnerable to the Black Lord’s machinations.
When Naskara reaches Airedene, the celestial cities clash in an apocalyptic battle, wherein Naskara could tip the balance of power in the darkness’ favour. If Airedene is destroyed, it may never be rebuilt, and its loss would change destiny forever. The seven Grey Gods have gathered to fight this latest battle in the eternal god war between the darkness and the light, but they face a dire enemy in the form of seven ancient and powerful dark gods.
Demon Lord - The Cyber Chronicles - The Queen's Blade - The Broken World - Slave Empire
Tuesday, October 12, 2021
Saturday, November 2, 2019
Demon Lord X - Forge of Time
The tenth book of the Demon Lord series is now available on pre-order at Smashwords, Apple, Kobo, Barnes & Noble, Amazon and other retailers.
Here's an excerpt to whet your appetite for what you can expect to read in Forge of Time:
Here's an excerpt to whet your appetite for what you can expect to read in Forge of Time:
The throng
murmured, many of its members turning to each other with furrowed brows, but
the disturbance died down when the judge raised a hand.
“If you’re
trying to incite unrest,” he said, “you’ll fail, and you’ll earn yourself a
worse punishment. You should keep quiet, while you’ve only lost your tongue.”
He signalled to the other two leather-clad thugs. “Arrest her.”
The men shoved
through the mob towards her.
“What you’re
doing is wrong!” she yelled. “If this
is the kind of justice those blue bastards impose, they’re as bad as dark gods!
They’re monsters!”
“Your heresy
just earned you a death sentence.” The judge turned to the jailers on the
podium. “What are you waiting for? Get on with it!”
“No!”
Ashryn scrambled
over the railing, and the crowd below surged aside as she dropped. She landed
lightly, the hawk tattoo on her back tingling, and headed for the judge, people
shuffling out of her way. He swung to face her, and the jailer with the hatchet
quit the scaffold to intercept her. As he seized her arm, her golden snake
tattoo glimmered, came to life and slithered up his sleeve. He released her
with a yell and recoiled, searching his clothes for the viper that slid under
them, its progress marked by a long, coiling bulge. The judge’s mouth flopped
open and the other jailer stared. The youth wrenched free of his captor’s
slackened hold and dived into the throng.
The spectators
were agog as the first jailer swore and squirmed, hunting for the elusive serpent.
He stripped off his jacket and flung it down, then grabbed at his chest as a
gleam of gold vanished under his shirt. He yelled and ripped off the garment,
spraying buttons, and the viper slithered into his trousers and coiled around
one leg. Ashryn smiled as the brawny man yanked down his trousers and made a
grab for the snake, which slid into his undershorts with a hiss. He rummaged
inside his remaining garment, his face twisted with dread at the threat to his
most sensitive parts, and she held out her arm before he resorted to extreme
measures to evict the snake, doubtless to the crowd’s disgust. The shimmering viper
reappeared on her skin and returned to its dormant state. The jailer groped
around for a minute longer before realising it was gone, then turned his back
and dragged up his trousers, darting her murderous looks as the onlookers
tittered.
The judge closed
his mouth and scowled at her. “So, you must be the sorceress I’ve heard about.
Our gods will want to meet you, and yet… The tales tell of how everyone
understands each other near you, but these people are still speaking their own
tongues.”
“You know
nothing, because you’re a moron!
You’re a spineless lackey, too.” She raised a finger, making him blanch and
step back. “You leave these poor people alone from now on.”
“Since you have
magic, our gods will deal with you.”
“They’ll have to
find me first, and I reckon I just gained the favour of the downtrodden masses
here, so good luck with that.”
Ashryn spun on her heel, and the crowd parted to
let her through. The thugs who had been sent to arrest her stepped into her
path, looking apprehensive, but the judge flicked a hand and they let her pass.
Evidently he wanted to avoid another demoralising magical display in front of
so many witnesses. Jeharad caught
up when she was halfway back to the shack.
“What the hell
was that?”
“How much did
you see?”
“Everything;
after you jumped off the balcony, I climbed up.”
“That was myth
magic, for defence.” She smiled. “It was quite entertaining, huh?”
Jeharad chuckled.
“I thought he was going to strip right off.”
“He might have,
if I hadn’t recalled it.”
His mirth faded.
“You shouldn’t have called so much attention to yourself.”
“Maybe not, but
I couldn’t let them cripple that poor boy. I think the locals might help to
hide us now, too. It’ll be beneficial to get in their good books.”
“I wouldn’t
count on that. If they’re loyal to their gods, you’ll have made matters worse.”
“Who would be
loyal to such barbarous gods?” she asked.
“Desperate
people who know they won’t survive long without them.”
Thursday, February 11, 2016
New Covers for The Cyber Chronicles Series
Here are the new Cyber Chronicles covers, which I really enjoyed creating. Science-fiction allows leeway for great creativity, and I'm very pleased with how these turned out, although some went through several versions before I was reasonably satisfied. The curse of a perfectionist. I would have spent more time on all the covers, and perhaps improved them more, but at some stage I had to call a halt and move on, or I'd never have finished them. I hope you like these!
Thursday, February 4, 2016
New Covers for Slave Empire and The Broken World
Below are the new
covers for these two series, either completely new or totally revamped with some
previous elements. Some of these went through several versions before I settled
on a final cover design that I like. As I got better at using the software, I
was able to improve the quality and be more adventurous. I love art, and enjoyed
making these, although there’s always room for improvement. I think these are
much better than the old ones.
Thursday, January 28, 2016
New Covers for The Queen’s Blade Revealed
Here are the new covers for The Queen’s Blade series. These are
now on the paperback versions of the series, currently available at CreateSpace.com and Amazon worldwide. You'll find Book One here: https://www.createspace.com/3658659. It took a lot of consideration before I was
satisfied that these covers suit the series and the characters, and I hope you
agree.
Wednesday, January 20, 2016
New Covers Revealed
I’ve now created
new covers for most of my books - the ones that had horrible, rushed jobs with the ‘never judge a book’ thinking and the
hope that readers wouldn’t feel the covers detracted from the overall
experience. I intend to publish all the books as paperbacks, so
good covers are crucial. I hope these are the last covers I do, at least for a while, not
counting new books, of course. I think these are truer to the books’ content,
some depicting scenes. I’ve taken into account the results of my poll on
FaceBook, wherein I learnt that the book title is more important than the
series title, and changed the titling accordingly. Below are the new covers for
the Demon Lord series. I hope you
like them!

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Saturday, June 27, 2015
Time Stop - Extract from Demon Lord IX: The Forgotten Lands
This extract is from Chapter Four:
Bane said, “I am
on the same quest, but I cannot reveal myself. Telvaron will want to kill me.”
“Telvaron wants
to kill everyone,” the greying man said. “It’s just a matter of how and when.”
“True, but he
will hunt me down himself.”
“Why?”
Bane glanced
around, steeling himself to take the plunge. “I am a god.”
The men roared
with laughter for several minutes. Bane sipped his ambrosia and waited for the
hilarity to die down. The grey-haired man wiped his eyes, chortling.
“What sort?”
“I command the
darkness.”
The men fell
about again, hooting, and two were so overcome they slid under the table. Other
patrons drew closer to share the joke. Bane raised a hand and flicked his
fingers.
“Stop.”
Everyone in the
taproom froze except the five at his table, whose laughter died as they became
aware of the silence. They stared about, their expressions wary or
disbelieving. The grizzled man tore his eyes from the stationary scene and
gaped at Bane.
“You did that?
You… stopped time.”
“Yes.”
“To prove -”
“Yes.”
“So -”
“Yes.”
The man sat
back. “Why do you want to free the goddess? If you’re a master of the
darkness…”
“I fight for the
light.” Bane flicked his fingers. “Resume.”
The hubbub recommenced,
and the patrons who had taken an interest in the joke at his table returned to
their previous pursuits after a few moments of eyeing the now-solemn sextet.
“Oy!” A bellow
from across the room made Bane wince and close his eyes. “What the hell do you
think you’re playing at, old bean?” Dramon shouted.
Bane shot him a
glare. Dramon snorted and nudged his brother, and the two muttered.
“Who’s he?” the greying
man asked.
“Do not worry
about him. Do you want my help now?”
The man thrust
out a callused hand. “I’m Jogan.”
Wednesday, June 24, 2015
Troll God - Extract from Demon Lord IX: The Forgotten Lands
This extract is from Chapter One:
Nomard stamped,
sending a ripple through the quasi-rock under their feet. It shivered, and then
heaved. The stench intensified to a sickening putridity, and the valley floor
writhed, sent up tendrils in search of prey and turned from black to mottled grey.
Several tendrils snaked up the ship’s flanks, and it rocked, and then rose. Bane
jumped back onto the ramp, and Drevarin followed.
Nomard drew his
sword and set off. “Tallyho!”
The troll god
was over a thousand yards tall, Bane calculated. Nomard, however, grew larger
with every step, and his apparel and sword grew with him. Like an earth demon,
he drew matter from his surroundings, particularly under his feet, which meant
he incorporated the dromon’s substance too. The semi-sentient entity groped for
him with multiple tendrils, but Nomard merely added them to his flesh and
ripped them free. Molten metal erupted from the ground in glowing streams and
joined the medley of matter that swelled the demon god’s form. By the time he
was halfway to Eord, Nomard was about five hundred yards tall.
Drevarin
grunted. “Impressive.”
Nomard was
roughly seven hundred yards tall when the troll god twitched, shedding dust,
then raised his head and opened purple eyes. He focussed on Nomard, and his
brow furrowed.
Drevarin remarked,
“Troll gods spend so much time immobile that dirt accumulates and moss and
plants grow in it. If they fall asleep in a sunny place, they can end up
resembling troll-shaped forests. It serves as excellent camouflage, but they
tend to rub off the trees when they wake up.”
Nomard was now
almost as tall as the troll god, streams of dust flowing into him from all
around, along with chunks of the dromon, which writhed and tried to snag his
legs. The troll god bent and gripped a massive, battle-scarred hammer that was
half-buried in the mountainside. He ripped it free with a gritty scrape and turned
to face Nomard. The demon god hefted his sword.
“Eord, old chap,
is that you?” Nomard’s deep voice echoed around the valley.
Thursday, June 18, 2015
Demon Lord IX: The Forgotten Lands Launch Coming Soon!
Good news! It’s almost here! Only
eleven days to go before Demon Lord IX:
The Forgotten Lands is released. It’s already available as a pre-order at
the iBookstore, Barnes & Noble and Kobo, and will be available at Amazon on
the release date: 30 June. So place your pre-order today and ensure you receive
your copy right away! The book is now on the final leg of the creation process:
editing and proofreading. To all of you who have been waiting almost two years
for the next instalment of the Demon Lord
series, deepest apologies.
My creative process was stymied by
my first visit to hospital, where I underwent major surgery to cut out a
five-kilogram ovarian tumour. It wasn’t just the trauma of the op or the
recovery time that delayed the next book for so long; it was also the illness
beforehand and the diagnosis that rendered me totally incapable of writing. That’s
a lot of stress! The good news is, that’s all in the past. The tumour was
mostly benign, I’m cancer-free and my channel to the fantasy worlds where my
heroes and heroines live is unblocked.
The Forgotten Lands may be the penultimate book in the Demon
Lord series. I can’t be sure until I write the next one, but it seems to be
a distinct possibility. So for everyone who feels my series are never-ending,
good news! They do eventually end. I’m hoping for a happy ending, but it’s out
of my hands. I go where the story takes me, and I have no idea what will happen
next. It’s as much of an adventure for me as it is for you. I’ll be publishing
some extracts here on my blog over the next few days, so watch this space!
Tuesday, December 30, 2014
iBooks Free Series-starter E-books Promotion!
iBooks has done it yet again! Just as I recovered from
reeling in amazement at their last promo of indie authors – in which I had a
taste of the action – they’ve started another multi-genre free series-starter feature
and included The Broken World Book One –
Children of Another God! I can’t begin to express how much it means to an
indie author to see his or her books featured at iBooks, which, in my humble
opinion, is the best indie e-book promotor in the world! Go iBooks! We love
you! iBooks rocks!
For all of you looking for a great holiday read, you’ll find
a wide selection of the best free series-starters at iBooks, so don’t miss out!
Grab your free e-books today and discover super series to read in 2015! Thank
you iBooks for all the great promotions in 2014, and all those still to come.
Thank you Mark Coker, founder of Smashwords.com, for all the support and
encouragement. You rock! If you’re an indie author looking for the best place
to publish your books, I highly recommend Smashwords.com. Congratulations to all the Smashwords authors who made it into the iBooks feature!
On another note, Demon
Lord 9, tentatively titled The
Forgotten Lands, is now available on pre-order, and the proposed
publication date is June 7, 2015. It might happen sooner, depending on how the
writing goes, and I’m hoping it will. This title may also change, subject to
what happens in the book, which isn’t finished yet. I have two other books in
the works – The Cyber Chronicles 10
and Slave Empire 4, both as yet
untitled. I’ll put those on pre-order as well, as soon as I’m comfortable that
I’m within striking distance of finishing them. I intend to try to make up for
my lack of writing last year – due to illness – and publish at least three new
titles in 2015. Lots of adventures still to come!
Sunday, December 14, 2014
Season’s Greetings and Happy Holidays!
It’s been an eventful, busy year and I’m
looking forward to some relaxation during the upcoming holidays, as I’m sure
you are too. This will be my last post for 2014, but readers can expect plenty
of new and interesting posts in the New Year.
Today, I thought I’d share three facts
about Christmas that you might not know.
Christmas
Fact 1
Pagans worshipped trees, sometimes bringing
them into their homes and decorating them, and the latter practice was adopted
by early Christians.
Christmas
Fact 2
Emperors in pre-Christian Rome forced reviled
citizens to bring gifts and offerings during the Saturnalia in December, and
this evolved into general gift-giving. Later, the Catholic Church adopted the
practice, re-rooting it in Saint Nicholas’ alleged gift-giving.
Christmas
Fact 3
Santa Claus came into being after Saint
Nicholas’ bones were moved from Turkey to Bari, Italy in 1087, where the saint
‘replaced’ the goddess known as Pasqua, who was said to fill children’s stockings
with gifts. The cult spread and was adopted by Celtic and German Pagans who
worshipped the god Woden – who boasted a long white beard and rode a winged
horse through the skies one evening each year. The Catholic Church then adopted
the practice too, but changed the gift-giving from 6 December to 25 December.
I hope you’ve enjoyed these facts. Here’s
to the best holiday season ever!
Monday, December 8, 2014
Legends and Folklore from Africa
Often called ‘The Cradle of Mankind’, many believe that
Africa, my home continent, is the birthplace of mankind. Whether or not this is
true, Africa is the source of myriad legends, folklore tales and unbelievable –
to most Western minds – beliefs. African folklore includes everything from the origins
of the universe and life after death to ancestral spirits, magic and celestial
and other beings.
In some African cultures, the Earth is believed
to be a goddess who created all living creatures, while other African tribes
believe their ancestors live inside the Earth, in homes similar to the ones
they lived in before their deaths.
Elephants appear in many African folktales and
fables, the latter usually portraying them as wise chiefs who settle disagreements
between forest creatures. Elephants are usually depicted as noble, kind and
wise. Ghana’s Ashanti people believe that elephants are the spirits of their
ancestral chiefs and give dead elephants chiefs’ burials, and Tanzania’s
Wachaga folklore says that the first elephant was once a human who was deceived
into losing all his limbs other than his right arm, which is now his trunk.
A Southern African tale tells of a girl who
became so fat that no man would marry her. Accused of witchcraft, she was
exiled. While wandering in the wilderness, she came across an elephant that
spoke to her in Zulu. She agreed to stay with him, and he helped her to find
food. The girl birthed four human sons, who were the Indhlovu clan’s ancestors.
The Kamba people of Kenya have a tale about how
elephants originated. A poor man heard about Ivonya-Ngia, who reportedly fed
the poor, and made the long journey to find his mansion. Ivonya-Ngia told his
men to give the poor man a hundred cows and a hundred sheep, but the poor man
replied that he did not want charity. Instead, he said, he wanted to know the
secret to being rich. Ivonya-Ngia gave the poor man a flask of ointment and
told him to rub it on his wife’s canine teeth in her upper jaw, wait for them
to grow and then sell them. After a few weeks, the teeth started to grow,
eventually becoming arm-length tusks. The poor man pulled out his wife’s huge
teeth – after some persuasion – and sold them at the market. A few weeks later,
his wife’s canine teeth were even bigger than before, but she refused to let
her husband pull them out. Her entire body began to grow bigger, and her skin
grew thicker and turned grey. Eventually, she went to live in the forest, where
she gave birth to a son, who was born an elephant. She went on to have more
children, all healthy – and all elephants. According to the story, this is why
elephants possess almost human intelligence.
An interesting Yoruba
belief that sounds quite New Age to me is that a person’s success depends on what
choices he or she made in Heaven before his/her human birth. According to this
belief, poor people should be patient, because, if they chose the right life
when in Heaven, it will still manifest as earthly wealth.
Many Africans believe
that every large tree has at least one spirit, whose voice one can hear if one
listens carefully with a knowledge of the spirits’ language. Hence, trees are
often revered. When cutting down trees to make boats or drums, for example, drum-
and boat-makers try to preserve the tree spirit so that it can protect or bless
the object/s made from its wood. A tree in Namibia is reported to eat people,
and it’s believed that only a woodpecker can rescue them.
In Central Zaire, dwarf-like
beings called Biloko are believed to reside in rainforests, protecting the
forest and its inhabitants. Biloko are restless ancestral spirits who have
grudges against the living, and are known to bewitch and eat humans.
Then there’s the West African
trickster god, Anansi, who is usually depicted as a spider, human or
spider-human who tricks humans into performing immoral acts that he gains
something from. These tricks usually fail, thus teaching valuable life lessons.
For example, one story says that Anansi wanted all the knowledge in the world
for himself. He eventually got the knowledge in a pot, which he tried to hide
in a tree. When he tried to climb the tree, he kept slipping, so his son
eventually asked him why he didn’t tie the pot to his back rather than his
front, as that would make climbing easier. Just then, the pot became untied and
fell, causing the world’s wisdom to fall out. A flash rainstorm washed the
wisdom into a river that fed into the ocean; hence, everyone in the world now
has some knowledge. Some stories also depict Anansi as the messenger between the
‘supreme god’, the sky god Nyame, and this world.
Perhaps the East
African good spirit called the Malaika is where the ‘devil and angel on your
shoulder’ originated – at least, in Africa. Folklore says the Malaika were sent
from Heaven to help humans, and they sit on a human’s right shoulder and
whisper to them what they should or shouldn’t do.
According to the Akan people of Ghana and Ivory Coast, humans once lived
deep inside the Earth. One day, five women, seven men, a dog and a leopard
crawled out of a massive hole made by a large worm. They became frantic with
terror, but the first man to set foot on the surface, Adu Ogyinae, calmed them
and took charge of co-ordination the construction of their first shelters.
I hope you enjoyed this post. I’d love to hear about
myths in your home country!
Monday, December 1, 2014
How to Recognise Real Life Assassins
In my fantasy series, The Queen’s Blade, the assassin Blade takes up the trade only
because he has to eat. He doesn’t enjoy the work, but doesn’t particularly
dislike it either. To him, it’s just a job, and one he’s able to do due to his
horrific past.
What motivates real life assassins? What goes
through the mind of someone who is able to plan and commit the murder of what
is often a complete stranger? Not many assassins are lunatics who are obsessed
with the target….
Here are the facts, courtesy of a Secret Service
study in which 83 assassins and would-be assassins (over a period of 50 years) were
interviewed and analysed.
* Assassins or would-be assassins rarely act on
impulse – attempts are usually well planned.
* Less than 50% of assassins have or show signs
of mental illness.
* 43% have a history of being delusional.
* A third of assassins value the assassination
act more than the target’s identity.
* 0% send death threats. (Some studies, however,
show that 4% sent death threats.)
* There doesn’t seem to be a set psychological
profile that all assassins fit into. However, there is usually an obvious
behavioural pattern.
* 86% are men.
* 77% are white.
* Known assassins’ ages range from 16 to 73.
* Around 50% are single.
* About a third have children.
* Almost 50% had attended college.
* 25% had a full-time job at the time of the
assassination or attempt.
* Four fifths have never been arrested for a
violent offence.
* 44% have histories of chronic depression.
* 54% have a history of harassment.
* 41% have threatened suicide at some point.
* Almost all the assassins analysed had
experienced a recent traumatic event, such as the loss of good health, a job, a
spouse or other loved one.
Reasoning
* Most assassins said the reason for their
assassination attempt was to gain fame.
* A handful said they wanted political change.
* Only a few had co-conspirators.
* Some wanted to gain attention for a cause.
* Some wanted to get revenge for a perceived
wrong.
* Some wanted to end their suffering by being
killed during the assassination attempt.
* Some claimed they wanted a ‘special
relationship’ with their target.
* A handful said that voices told them to
assassinate the target.
So it seems that, like my fictional assassin,
Blade, most real life assassins also embark upon assassinations due to trauma
in their lives. Traumatic events often change people, and most assassins were
once (and still are) ordinary people like you and I who were simply pushed too
far – or who perceived themselves to be pushed too far.
Monday, November 24, 2014
What to read after The Cyber Chronicles
If you’ve read The Cyber Chronicles
and are looking for another series to lose yourself in, I recommend my space
opera series, Slave Empire.
The protagonist, Rayne, shares Sabre’s struggle for freedom… she is
the golden child who many wish to slay, prophesised to save a galactic empire.
Alien
hunters invade a dying Earth in search of a saviour, and an ancient prophecy
predicts a golden child who will save a galactic empire. A mysterious black
ship is Rayne’s guide and a masked outlaw known as the Shrike her guardian.
Others want to slay her and prevent the prophecy from coming true. In the midst
of two great empires’ strife, the Shrike holds the power to save or destroy
her.
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Sunday, November 16, 2014
My Favourite Television Programme, from a Writer’s Perspective
Not
surprisingly, my favourite TV programme is a sci-fi series, Almost Human. There are many others I
prefer, but that’s the best one showing at the moment. While it’s a rather run of
the mill crime detective thriller sort of thing, it is set in the future, and
the technology is interesting. It’s more character driven than most, and the
hero is a handsome, but somewhat damaged and flawed individual. I like damaged
heroes! There’s no romance in it, sadly, but there is occasionally some mild
flirtation. More importantly, it isn’t rife with gratuitous sex scenes or foul
language.
Almost
Human revolves around a detective and his android
partner, who has a supposed ‘synthetic soul’, which makes him almost human. It
has a bit of fairly funny comedy in it, and I haven’t spotted any instances of
deus ex machina or illogical, inexplicable technology, or plot holes. I hate
plot holes. I tend to shout ‘ah, come on!’ at the TV when I spot those. They’re
annoying! So, the writer wrote him or herself into a corner and couldn’t figure
out a good way to extricate him/herself. That doesn’t give the writer carte
blanche to ‘make it so’ because that’s just ‘the way it is’. Or, worse still,
ignore the problem. Put some effort into it, people! TV audiences aren’t
morons, and I stop watching shows that irritate me. If I sit after the show
wondering how the heck that made any sense at all, I’m not going to annoy
myself with more of the same next time that show’s playing.
Almost
Human also has believable action scenes. The hero is
sometimes beaten up, and he and his android partner save each other from time
to time, each having abilities the other lacks. That makes them easier to
relate to and sympathise with, making the audience inclined to care about them
and root for them. So, hats off to the writers of Almost Human. Good job.
Monday, November 3, 2014
Defending Against Assassins
Just like the wealthy in my The Queen’s Blade fantasy
series, one of the first things our ancestors did to protect themselves from
assassination was employ armed bodyguards. Bodyguards not only act as a shield,
but keep an eye out for any threats, often scouting ahead. Those who hired them
had to be careful about who they employed as bodyguards, though, for divided
loyalties often led to the bodyguards being the assassins. This method of
defence was so effective that assassins began to use stealthier methods like
poisoning. This type of assassination, too, was easily avoided by employing food
tasters.
Another popular means of defence against assassination is the employment
of a body double – someone who pretends to be the potential target in order to
draw attention from him or her in high-risk situations, and who looks similar
enough to the potential target to be mistaken for him or her.
When firearms and bombs became a more popular method of
assassination, one of the first things potential targets did was increase their
number of bodyguards. Large public areas where the person was due to appear
were also cleared in advance, to make would-be assassins more visible.
At the dawn of the 20th century, armoured vehicles began
to be used to transport important people. Today, these vehicles can save one
from most small arms fire, and even small bombs and mines. Bullet-proof vests also
came into use, worn mostly just for public events.
Another way of defence against possible assassination is to limit
access to high-profile people by putting visitors through numerous checks
before they’re allowed to see the VIP. Bomb and metal detectors are also widely
used in today’s world, as are security cameras in homes and offices.
Some potential targets go as far as to isolate themselves as a way
of defence – not a nice way to live, I imagine!
Monday, October 27, 2014
Mistakes to Avoid in Book Blurbs
Let’s assume your book cover was eye catching
and has encouraged a potential new reader to read your book’s blurb. A good
blurb can motivate that reader to purchase your book – or avoid looking at
anything with your name on it ever again.
Below are a few mistakes to avoid, which I hope
will help you write a great blurb that will draw in new readers.
Spelling,
grammar and punctuation mistakes
It goes without saying that your book, blurb and
all marketing material should be error-free. Yet I still constantly see
mistakes in blurbs – the very thing that is intended to entice readers to
purchase your book is the same thing that can turn them off it. I certainly
wouldn’t waste money on a book for which the blurb contains errors – if the
author can’t even edit a few short paragraphs properly, just how many errors
will the book itself contain?
Bad
formatting
Avoid writing one long paragraph for your blurb.
Rather, split your blurb into shorter paragraphs to make it easier and faster
to read – unless, of course, the entire blurb is very short.
Spoilers
Spoilers are those nasty little things that tell
readers what happens in the story. Sure, you need to tell them a little in
order to gain their interest, but, if you tell them how the story ends or other
major things that happen in the book, leaving no questions in their minds, they
will have no reason to purchase and read said book, will they? I advise giving
the overall theme or plot – specifically the conflict – but, as far as possible,
leaving out the finer details.
Summarising
the book
Summaries are for traditional publishers and
agents, not potential new readers, and thus tend to provide far more
information than is necessary for a book blurb. In fact, summaries and blurbs
are total opposites – summaries are intended to give away the ending so
publishers can see if your story has a strong ending, and blurbs are intended
to entice readers to read the book in order to find out how it ends. Summaries
also often come across as rather ‘blah, blah’ – ‘this happens and then that
happens and then…’ and so on. Remember, the purpose of a blurb is not to tell
the reader every little thing that happens in your book.
Being
vague
There’s often a fine line between giving too
much or too little information in a blurb. While it’s inadvisable to give too
much information, it is just as bad to not give enough. Readers want to know
what to expect from the book, so you need to give them enough information to pique
their interest.
Lengthy
Try to keep your book blurb to between 150 and
300 words. Most readers do not have all day to browse for new books and
authors, so, if your blurb is too long, they may choose to skip your book and
look at another instead.
Too
much selling
Yes, the purpose of a blurb is to sell books.
However, this should be done by sharing what the story is about (it helps to
have an interesting book!), not by creating a sales pitch in the blurb. Avoid
using your blurb to tell readers how great the book is, how wonderful and gifted
the writer is and so on. The story details should do that.
Giving
readers the wrong idea
The blurb is intended to tell readers what to
expect from the book. Do not promise something in the blurb that the book does
not contain. In other words, if your book has a few science fiction elements,
but is mostly fantasy, do not even mention the sci-fi elements in your blurb.
It will make readers think the book is science fiction, even if it is listed as
fantasy, and they are likely to be disappointed – and readers do not usually
purchase other books from authors who have made them feel as if their money was
wasted on the purchase.
Weak
ending
Your blurb needs to have a strong ending that
leaves the reader interested. There’s not much point in starting off well and
ending on a boring note, because readers will then be left feeling bored, not
interested. It’s also a bad idea to end the blurb with a question – in most
cases, the reader already knows the answer will probably be ‘yes’, so the words
are wasted and it might even annoy some people.
I hope you find these tips helpful!
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